Project #196334 - Thesis paper revision

Business Tutors

Subject Business
Due By (Pacific Time) 08/14/2017 09:00 am

I have a 30 page thesis that's already completed, i need someone else to revise it just to have a fresh eye. The revision requirements are below:

1. Please read through the paper line by line. There are some repeating and redundant sentences in each paragraph. Please make the paper more clear and precise, have the focuses highlighted/emphasized.

2. There is a theoretical model in the beginning, please refer back to this model in the text occasionally.

3. Polish the language to make it consistent and smooth.

4. Make sure the table of content and page numbers are correct.

5. Add a paragraph discussing the shortage of the paper or further research/discussion needed in the end.

Need you to be detail oriented and good at language.

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