Project #211206 - 5.5.8 Practice revise your essay the past,present and future of globalization

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Subject History
Due By (Pacific Time) 11/10/2017 08:31 am

5.5.8 PracticeRevise Your Essay: The Past, Present, and Future of Globalization
Practice Assignment
World History Sem 2 (S3855095)
Anayeli Cancino
Points possible: 30
Date: ____________

 

In this assignment, you will revise and fine-tune your essay summarizing and evaluating how modern globalization is the result of a process of specialization and trade that began at least 8,000 years ago. In addition, you will revise and fine-tune your predictions about the future of globalization based on historical evidence.
Reflect
The first step in the revision process is to revisit your original assignment. You were asked to write an explanatory essay summarizing and evaluating how modern globalization is the result of a process of specialization and trade that began at least 8,000 years ago. You were also asked to predict the future of globalization. An explanatory essay provides an explanation of a particular viewpoint or event. The goal of an explanatory essay is to educate the reader, not to share your own opinions. An explanatory essay should also be unbiased. 

Reread your essay and ask yourself the following questions:
  1. Did I include an introduction paragraph, body paragraphs, and a conclusion?
  2. Is my essay objective (based on fact, not opinion)?
  3. Did I summarize and evaluate how modern globalization is the result of a process of specialization and trade that began at least 8,000 years ago?
  4. Did I provide a prediction about the future of globalization?
  5. Did I use unbiased historical evidence?
  6. Did I provide complete citations in MLA format for the evidence that I used?
If you answered no (or even "sort of") to any of the questions above, it's time to go back and revise your essay. You should also make sure that you review the scoring rubric below. These are the guidelines that your teacher will use to score your essay. 

When you have completed your revisions, submit your essay to your teacher for scoring.
Here is the rubric on which your research and writing will be graded.
Understanding of Assignment (15 points) Points Possible Points Awarded
The student summarizes and evaluates how modern globalization is the result of a process of specialization and trade that began at least 8,000 years ago. 5  
The student offers a prediction about the future of globalization. 5  
The student uses evidence from historical sources to support his or her writing. 5  
Form, Presentation, and Style (15 points) Points Possible Points Awarded
The essay starts with an introductory paragraph that includes a clearly stated topic sentence. 3  
The essay includes at least three body paragraphs to explain and support the thesis and then offers a prediction in another body paragraph. 3  
The essay ends with a conclusion paragraph that is closely tied to the introduction and body paragraphs and summarizes the main points. 3  
The student uses complete citations to cite historical evidence. 3  
The student uses transitions to link paragraphs and points. 3  
Total 30  
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